PASSAGES: Travel the USA and more!

PASSAGES: Travel the USA and more!

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Chapter 41: Kent and Mahuiki keep hunting Koa
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Chapter 41: Kent and Mahuiki keep hunting Koa

and then a twist happens

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Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16:

Chapter 17:

Chapter 18:

Chapter 19:

Chapter 20:

Chapter 21:

Chapter 22:

Chapter 23:

Chapter 24:

Chapter 25:

Chapter 26:

Chapter 27:

Chapter 28:

Chapter 29:

Chapter 30:

Chapter 31:

Chapter 32:

Chapter 33:

Chapter 34:

Chapter 35:

Chapter 36:

Chapter 37:

Chapter 38:

Chapter 39:

Chapter 40:

Chapter 41: Kent stared at the DLNR agent, stone-faced, as the man staggered out of the trees, dripping sweat. “What kind of interagency cooperation is this, Detective? You trying to ditch me?”

“We had to follow the dogs at the pace they set,” Kent said.

Mahuiki gestured to the garden, the empty hut. “But our witness isn’t here.”

“Fine. She doesn’t need to be,” Bill Chin said, stalking across the clearing. “Our agency has jurisdiction over any squatter dwellings. Even on private land, if it’s co-managed by the county, as Waimalia is. I’m going inside. I’ll gather evidence regarding this unauthorized development.”

Chin reached the front door and flipped up the simple latch that held it closed, stepping inside.

Kent and Mahuiki followed more slowly, and Kent held up his phone. No Service. If only there were more signal, Kent would’ve called the district attorney and double checked if any evidence found in such a search was admissible. He’d err on the side of collecting anything likely.

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