PASSAGES: Travel the USA and more!

PASSAGES: Travel the USA and more!

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Chapter 39: Koa and Kimo meet Malia
Wild Girl by TJ Neal

Chapter 39: Koa and Kimo meet Malia

And experience an unwelcome surprise

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Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16:

Chapter 17:

Chapter 18:

Chapter 19:

Chapter 20:

Chapter 21:

Chapter 22:

Chapter 23:

Chapter 24:

Chapter 25:

Chapter 26:

Chapter 27:

Chapter 28:

Chapter 29:

Chapter 30:

Chapter 31:

Chapter 32:

Chapter 33:

Chapter 34:

Chapter 35:

Chapter 36:

Chapter 37:

Chapter 38:

Chapter 39: Kimo’s deep brown eyes were shiny and his expression soft as he gazed down at the infant he held. Baby Malia, swaddled in a flannel blanket, rested on his thick forearms with her skull cradled in his big, work-worn hands. “She’s so tiny,” he whispered.

“She sure didn’t feel tiny when I was pushing her out,” Ella, sitting on the edge of the hospital bed, smiled. “She’s a healthy seven pounds.”

“I just mean…” his voice trailed off as he repositioned the baby close to his chest, clearly smitten. He stroked her forehead with his finger, never finishing the sentence as he stared down at the baby.

Ella caught Koa’s gaze, suppressing a smile. “So glad you came, Koa.”

“Your dad was kind to invite me.”

They both glanced over at the big man, who clearly had no interest in anyone but his new granddaughter.

“I’ve been thinking,” Ella told Koa. “It’s a lot to deal with her alone. I was wondering if you’d like to move in with me for a while. Once I can go home.”

Before Koa could answer, Kimo glanced up. “I want you to come to my house, Ella,” he whispered.

“You don’t have to worry about waking her up, Dad. She sleeps like a rock,” Ella said. “And no offense, but the answer’s no.”

Father and daughter locked eyes in a fierce contest of wills that Koa had witnessed many times over the years.

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